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posted February 14th, 2013, 2:20 am


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February 14th, 2013, 2:37 am

Reikan

aah

First- sorry for the delay again!! It's time I learn to update right on time. Life's been busy and matters came up, but I'll keep on updating paperplane no matter what.

The last bubble sounds horrible, but I don't know how I could express the same idea in a fancier way... Help, anyone? ;;

And last, thank you for reading Paperplane!! Already 200+ fans, thank you so much guys!

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February 14th, 2013, 3:24 am

HPDMotaku

wow it looks amazing~!!! i'm so glad i'm reading paperplane, every update is better than the last! probably a better way to express what he's thinking would be "THERE they are"?? or "It's them"? here they are is awkward and doesnt really fit, since its his thoughts and hes not saying it to anyone!!

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February 14th, 2013, 5:11 am

Reikan

@HPDMotaku : woa, thank you so much for the quick comment. I tried with both versions, and finally settled with "There they are!", which sounded perhaps less awkward.

Your insights really helped me a lot to grasp the difference. <333 I'm really glad you're reading my comic and most of all, enjoying it ;///; thank you so much!

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February 14th, 2013, 3:29 pm

kewe

this page looks fantastic ;v; The backgrounds are really great!! Like complex but also simple enough that it doesn't detract from the characters IDK SOBS i just love it

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February 19th, 2013, 10:25 pm

ecarg

Waaah Kiwi, you're really inspiring me to want to try my hand at illustrating a story through panels~ This looks so amazing so far, can't wait to see more pages. ;7; <33

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March 13th, 2015, 12:32 pm

Nakashi

Love the artwork! Hope you update soon (: can't wait to read more

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